his is my first poem which I wrote in my 10th std.I still dont know what made me write this ..But this has always being one of my favourites...
SILENCE
In the midst of darkness
I searched for a friend
A friend to confess
A friend to console
But silence was the answer.
The light I saw atlast
Which glowed in the darkness
Made a feeling my dream has come
And sorrows have gone
But the sight of the glow
Turning down and down
Made the tears fill my eyes
Still an another silence.
Despite my failures I dream and hope
For an another glow to come
A glow which breaks the silence
A glow that shines forever
So as my search continues
Silence is the answer....
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kwel one ........
Comment by manu— 2007/08/15 @ 08:02 PM — (Reply)
Not all can define the need of friendship like this...friendship is the connection between hearts which wont be complete if u r me is missing...you express the word silence which is too apt to define the incompletion of that...we all may b knowing these thngs..but cant define like u did..just touching..good one..
Comment by Aravind— 2007/08/15 @ 08:32 PM — (Reply)
Comment by gayatri— 2007/08/16 @ 06:36 AM — (Reply)
touching .... you have portrayed the search for a friend very beautifully ... loved it :)
Comment by — 2007/08/15 @ 09:13 PM — (Reply)
touching .... you have portrayed the search for a friend very beautifully ... loved it :)
by the way .. font size kurakku plzzz :D
Comment by Meenu — 2007/08/15 @ 09:14 PM — (Reply)
Comment by gayatri— 2007/08/15 @ 09:21 PM — (Reply)
its very nice.......wait for ....new comments
Comment by Ajith.T— 2007/08/16 @ 07:42 PM — (Reply)
great yaar...
Comment by — 2007/08/18 @ 07:24 PM — (Reply)
im the glow.
and silence is my answer =P
Comment by indu— 2007/09/04 @ 10:34 AM — (Reply)
daaa niceee da!! ho ninakku ithreyum talent undennu njan arinjilla!!
very nice!!!!
Comment by — 2007/09/15 @ 06:28 PM — (Reply)
DAAA KIDILAMM!!! u have good talent!!!
Comment by sreeram— 2007/09/15 @ 06:30 PM — (Reply)